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Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 8:20 pm
by TPRJones
The whole thing is a first-person sloppy mess. Here's a typical sample:
“We lie there, panting together, waiting for our breathing to slow. He gently strokes my hair … Boy … I Survived. That wasn’t so bad. I’m more stoic than I thought. My inner goddess is prostrate … well, at least she’s quiet.”
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 8:23 pm
by GORDON
ew.
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 8:28 pm
by TheCatt
Hah, that is some bad writing. But whatever works for people, works for people.
As more than one husband I know from back then said "I got lucky tonight, and my wife didn't even have wine beforehand!"
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 1:46 pm
by Malcolm
Fifty Shades of banned in India.
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 2:44 pm
by GORDON
The country that invented the kama sutra banned this movie?
Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 2:57 pm
by Malcolm
GORDON wrote:The country that invented the kama sutra banned this movie?
That kind of my thought. The country that has ancient temples with nothing but divine porn sculptures decorating the perimeter is offended by Twilight BDSM fanfic?
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Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2015 2:58 pm
by GORDON
There's nothing that an excess of piety can't ruin.
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 1:27 pm
by Malcolm
New book, Amazon bestseller in one day based on preorders.
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 4:59 pm
by GORDON
Yeah, my wife is all damp over it. I find it annoying, overall.
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 5:40 pm
by TPRJones
It's just so awful, why is it so popular? And don't say because BDSM; these books do every single thing so completely wrong in every way it absolutely horrifies real BDSM people.
Fifty Shades of Grey is about BDSM in the same way that The Wicker Man is about beekeeping.
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Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 5:42 pm
by TheCatt
Sometimes things just strike a chord.
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2015 5:59 pm
by Malcolm
Feminism and female empowerment through bad writing and bad bondage.
Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2015 1:19 pm
by Malcolm
Copy stolen. Betting the pages will be stickier than a 50-year old Playboy issue when they get it back.