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Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2017 6:58 pm
by GORDON
Designing the cover right now.
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Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 8:13 am
by GORDON
Leisher wrote: GORDON wrote: First review is in: "... I was up until 3 last night finishing it, because I didn't want to put it down."

That's great! Now let someone other than your mom read it!
1: GFY, which is the title of your sex tape.
2 Second review is in, "I need the next book right now."
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 9:53 am
by Leisher
GORDON wrote: 1: GFY, which is the title of your sex tape.
You're just mad because I'd rather fuck myself than fuck you.
GORDON wrote: 2 Second review is in, "I need the next book right now."
Great! Your wife read it. Now let someone not related to you read it.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 2:00 pm
by GORDON
Wife hasn't read it.
Right now I am just letting a handful of people read it for editing purposes "Find mistakes/things that don't make sense." But so far, so good. I went over and over it myself about 10 times.
I'll give you the advance copy when I need to gather up good reviews prior to publishing.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 2:24 pm
by Leisher
GORDON wrote: Wife hasn't read it.
Change "wife" to "son" in my comment.
I look forward to reading it. I'm flying to Richburg at the end of the month, so it'd be awesome to have it to read then...hint, hint.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 2:56 pm
by GORDON
Hoping to have it available on Kindle by December 1. There might even be an audio book by then.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 2:57 pm
by GORDON
And it def isn't a YA book. It is very rapey.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:01 pm
by Leisher
GORDON wrote: There might even be an audio book by then.
Who is reading it? (Do NOT say you.)
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:02 pm
by GORDON
Your mom.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:22 pm
by Leisher
I wouldn't listen to that either.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2017 10:46 pm
by GORDON
I was surprised there were people in the "book" club I am going to hit up for the early reviews... that don't read books. They will only listen to the audio versions.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 12:12 am
by Leisher
You should actually let my mom read it.
She would finish your trilogy in an evening. I'd get an honest opinion out of her by saying it's an acquaintance's work.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 8:37 am
by GORDON
I don't need an honest opinion, I know it's good. I just need free proofreading, and good initial reviews for Amazon for launch day.
I thought it was pretty amazing before it was even done. I asked my early readers to check it out, "I know I am biased and could be deluding myself, but let me know if it is as good as I think it is.". So far all signs point to yes, it is.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 9:06 am
by Leisher
I think you have vaginal hubris.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 9:42 am
by TheCatt
Gordon found his inner woman.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 11:10 am
by GORDON
All of the voices I heard when I was writing this story... the characters whispering in my ear, telling me what happened... I am either channeling dead people, or yeah, I have a lot of feminine split personalities.
Personally I think I'm channeling dead people, telling a story that actually happened a long time ago. There have been signs.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 11:42 am
by TheCatt
"So when did you first realize Gordon was losing his mind?"
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 1:09 pm
by Leisher
Well, I met him in 1996. That's when I first suspected...
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 1:26 pm
by GORDON
TheCatt wrote: "So when did you first realize Gordon was losing his mind?"
I've had more than one sleepless night since I started writing in which I was wondering this. These characters seem to like whispering new plot details at me when I'm swimming laps, of all times.
But it all appears to be working for me, I just got back from a lunch/meeting with the people I have editing/proofreading, and the consensus is that it's a great book. They like the characters, like the stories, and I just gave them unpolished copies of the 2nd and 3rd books, because they were all demanding it. And more importantly, they do NOT consider it to be erotica, so thankfully I made it very clear that it was abuse, not sex. As it started out as a smut book, and then I went back and rewrote it, so I'm glad that distinction is sharp. Don't want to get banned on amazon. Well, my mom thought it was erotica, but she was the only one.
December 1 may be a little ambitious as a launch date, though. But maybe.
Book - "Saved - Book 1 of The Circle Trilogy" - by me
Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2017 2:16 pm
by TheCatt
Lots of women have rape fantasies. And, men, too, I guess.
So I guess you learned something about your mom.